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Bodies
Feel
my Velvet touch
on your skin
Feel
my naked wet
tongue licking
Feel
me sensually rub
your member
Feel
burning need and
surrender
Forget your life
Forget your wife
Release
unto me
baby
*Author’s note: Parody
my Velvet touch
on your skin
Feel
my naked wet
tongue licking
Feel
me sensually rub
your member
Feel
burning need and
surrender
Forget your life
Forget your wife
Release
unto me
baby
*Author’s note: Parody
Published 9th Dec 2018
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9th Dec 2018 10:04pm
"I'm burning I'm burning I'm burning for you..." divorced so wife is a distant memory lol so pull the rip cord and release away. Warmed up a cold winters day : )
10th Dec 2018 5:46am
uh-oh! Well perhaps ‘forget your wife’ is not such a bad idea then. Thanks for commenting :)
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9th Dec 2018 11:09pm
I do take this as a parody and love every line. A fine read and funny as hell. Also quite a turn on...
10th Dec 2018 5:50am
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
9th Dec 2018 11:18pm
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10th Dec 2018 5:51am
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Aug 2019 11:45pm
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13th Dec 2018 11:55am
Anonymous
15th Dec 2018 00:56am
Very good imagery. A quest for the forbidden. It's hot stuff. Good parody. Good ink. J
15th Dec 2018 00:58am
