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Dying wish
Promise did I,
love for you eternal
death smiled, you lie
You slept with him
And I died.
love for you eternal
death smiled, you lie
You slept with him
And I died.
Published 7th Dec 2018
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7th Dec 2018 6:58pm
8th Dec 2018 3:51pm
8th Dec 2018 4:01pm
Yeah.... I get it now.
I wanted painting a picture of someone, who loves a girl who didn't love him as much and ultimately lost it all... I don't know if I succeeded
I wanted painting a picture of someone, who loves a girl who didn't love him as much and ultimately lost it all... I don't know if I succeeded
