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Only Sound
Only sound I want to hear
The only sound that really matters
Are those that come from your heart
The whispers that escape
Sweetly from your lips
Even this will not be enough
For I need much more
The sound of the burning in your soul
Sensual cracklings flames
The music of your core
The voice of passion trembling
These vibrations that conjure new feelings
Surrendering finally to fate
Dancing within a band of joy
The majestic beauty of release
Embracing senses on fire
Bringing home the purity of love
The life of entanglement beginning
Sharing the source of our being
In the simplicity of pleasure
©️ AspergerPoet56
The only sound that really matters
Are those that come from your heart
The whispers that escape
Sweetly from your lips
Even this will not be enough
For I need much more
The sound of the burning in your soul
Sensual cracklings flames
The music of your core
The voice of passion trembling
These vibrations that conjure new feelings
Surrendering finally to fate
Dancing within a band of joy
The majestic beauty of release
Embracing senses on fire
Bringing home the purity of love
The life of entanglement beginning
Sharing the source of our being
In the simplicity of pleasure
©️ AspergerPoet56
Published 4th Dec 2018
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4th Dec 2018 10:22pm
4th Dec 2018 10:25pm
4th Dec 2018 10:29pm
"Only sound I want to hear
The only sound that really matters
Are those that come from your heart"
... that's a real nice opening three lines ... draws the reader in straight away wondering 'what happens next?'
Welcome to DUP. Josh.
The only sound that really matters
Are those that come from your heart"
... that's a real nice opening three lines ... draws the reader in straight away wondering 'what happens next?'
Welcome to DUP. Josh.
4th Dec 2018 10:33pm
My problem with writing is I don’t really think it just comes out as is no rewriting or re arranging
4th Dec 2018 11:13pm
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2020 4:35pm
Wow, C
What a way to announce yourself here, on DU!
You've always had such a stunningly beautiful poet's heart. It's a marvel, to look back and see how you do.. 'just let it spill'.... I am breathless in just how talented you are. I guess at times, I forget, that your mind is just preordained to that of "poet".. You know me, and my disdain for anything referring to 'God's will' or the like, but whatever force is out there, definitely instilled within you the ability to make words sing in all their illustrious beauty.
It's a pleasure to read and such an exorbitant joy of mine, to know.
I 💜 this opportunity to walk with you in the past, a bit. It's a gorgeous view and a treasure to behold.
All my love,
🌹 🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
What a way to announce yourself here, on DU!
You've always had such a stunningly beautiful poet's heart. It's a marvel, to look back and see how you do.. 'just let it spill'.... I am breathless in just how talented you are. I guess at times, I forget, that your mind is just preordained to that of "poet".. You know me, and my disdain for anything referring to 'God's will' or the like, but whatever force is out there, definitely instilled within you the ability to make words sing in all their illustrious beauty.
It's a pleasure to read and such an exorbitant joy of mine, to know.
I 💜 this opportunity to walk with you in the past, a bit. It's a gorgeous view and a treasure to behold.
All my love,
🌹 🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
14th Dec 2020 4:55pm
More a whimpering entrance
But i suppose
Everyone has a differing opion
Of how they see things
But i suppose
Everyone has a differing opion
Of how they see things
26th Feb 2024 5:45pm
"The sound of the burning in your soul
Sensual cracklings flames
The music of your core"
I think these lines speak volumes. When desire and aching burn so hot, we can almost hear it in our minds, it makes for lovely, sensual poetry.
Well done.
Sensual cracklings flames
The music of your core"
I think these lines speak volumes. When desire and aching burn so hot, we can almost hear it in our minds, it makes for lovely, sensual poetry.
Well done.
26th Feb 2024 9:11pm
it took me 3 yrs after discovering this site to actually join and post something
thanks for apprecating
thanks for apprecating
