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absolutely relative
we are universal
decay,
where relative
and the absolute
crossed borders
a confused species
that loves and grows
in decline
breathing
through surfaces
as point particles
drawn to
white dwarfs heat
extinguished
as
the black hole absorbs
all
and radiates
a minuscule
of a universe
called
love
decay,
where relative
and the absolute
crossed borders
a confused species
that loves and grows
in decline
breathing
through surfaces
as point particles
drawn to
white dwarfs heat
extinguished
as
the black hole absorbs
all
and radiates
a minuscule
of a universe
called
love
Published 4th Dec 2018
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Now that's an interesting take on things...
I'm not so sure that I agree... completely...
but fractals being what they are
and... I trust in Mother Nature...
I see you more as mostly right...
but I, myself would have liked to eke
more love out of the equation...
I'm not so sure that I agree... completely...
but fractals being what they are
and... I trust in Mother Nature...
I see you more as mostly right...
but I, myself would have liked to eke
more love out of the equation...
4th Dec 2018 5:19pm
Thank you for reading, giving thought, and expressing them to me.
I agree with you wholeheartedly. We are capable of so much love. All we have to do is not feed that selfabsorbing inclination that consumes all the love around us..
In terms of science, I’m not worried. That’s at least a couple hundred million years away. I have to worry about andromeda colliding into the milky first and foremost.
I agree with you wholeheartedly. We are capable of so much love. All we have to do is not feed that selfabsorbing inclination that consumes all the love around us..
In terms of science, I’m not worried. That’s at least a couple hundred million years away. I have to worry about andromeda colliding into the milky first and foremost.
4th Dec 2018 8:16pm
Interesting read ... still thinking about it. I wonder if love is like Hawking radiation ... something created out of nothing ... a particle that doesn't manage to extinguish itself but continues forever ...? Dunno but this is the sort of thing that your poem brought to mind.
I like your take on Love, Anon...
makes lots of sense to me...
why should love not be... raw energy?
And Hawking might have seen it too...
for he held love for all mankind... Ely
makes lots of sense to me...
why should love not be... raw energy?
And Hawking might have seen it too...
for he held love for all mankind... Ely
4th Dec 2018 8:27pm
The line “minuscule of a universe called love” is in reference to Hawking radiation. Well done.
