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Lonely Heart
I Just Write What's in My Lonely Heart...
He plays in my head like a scratched record.
I've begun to question my own sanity.
Is he even real? Or is this just pretend?
I wait around all day just to hear from him.
Is this even normal or am I just losing it?
Lonely darkness sinking in, because all I do is think of him.
Smothered with unwanted attention, did I forget to mention the turmoil that I live in?
I thought I'd save me from myself, but it seems I need help.
This loneliness is destroying me, I feel so defeated.
Where's my Prince Charming at when I really need em'?
Or have I just been cheated?
For my Prince Charming doesn't exist.
I guess true love is just a myth.
cherry_blossom
Published 9th Nov 2011
| Edited 14th Sep 2012
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9th Nov 2011 8:17pm
wen it seems dis hard
dats wen u must Look To God
othawise u wil 4eva b alone
bcuz only God Can Turn ur heart n2 a home.....
dats wen u must Look To God
othawise u wil 4eva b alone
bcuz only God Can Turn ur heart n2 a home.....
9th Nov 2011 9:09pm
Very True goodest
Thank You for the advice & of course taking the time to read my words :)
Thank You for the advice & of course taking the time to read my words :)
9th Nov 2011 9:45pm
10th Nov 2011 6:43am
very good. inspirational. i love poems that talk about the pains of loving someone and not being able to have them. its what i relate to most. great job. looking forward to reading some more :)
10th Nov 2011 7:39am
Thank you so much for your compliments, very much appreciated. Love, unfortunatley can bring upon so many negative feelings that can not be ignored & need to be expressed....my remedy is to write about it.
Thanks again :)
Thanks again :)
22nd Nov 2011 7:02pm
So extremely real. Beautifully raw. I'm sorry you had to go through something like that, but thank you for sharing it with the rest of us.
28th Nov 2011 3:58pm
Thank You Kestaa for the read and comment :) Greatly appreciated. This as well as all my poems def. depict my true feelings.
7th Dec 2011 11:02pm
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19th Dec 2011 4:01pm
C_B:)
When one is lonely thats what happens the memories of every touch and smile flash like a movie and 'scratched record' tormenting the psyche.
Like this much.
When one is lonely thats what happens the memories of every touch and smile flash like a movie and 'scratched record' tormenting the psyche.
Like this much.
19th Dec 2011 4:25pm
RubixCube (Jordanne)
Loneliness is amazingly wicked but nonetheless provides great writing material. I guess there's one plus lol
Thank you much for your feedback & kind words.
:)
Loneliness is amazingly wicked but nonetheless provides great writing material. I guess there's one plus lol
Thank you much for your feedback & kind words.
:)
7th Jan 2012 10:21am
7th Jan 2012 10:28am
Anonymous
14th Sep 2012 5:43pm
How I felt the sadness in this. I hope that one day the wait will not be long or none at all.
13th Dec 2012 10:56pm
Hmmm ... well, seems as though you've found your Prince Charming now right ???
However, this is a good write ....
Thought i'd comment as i see that you & I share something ... ???
Our D.O.B. ... !!!
Taurean Poets 4'evs .... Oh yes .... !!!!
Bless
Virge
However, this is a good write ....
Thought i'd comment as i see that you & I share something ... ???
Our D.O.B. ... !!!
Taurean Poets 4'evs .... Oh yes .... !!!!
Bless
Virge
7th Jan 2015 2:22am
