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When
Your arms
Legs
Restrained
Perfect X
Heavy breathing
Eyes
Covered
Blindfolded
Darkness
Suspense building
My hand
Resting
On lacy
Knickers
Rising heat
I rub
Grip
You moan
I smile
Mounting pleasure
Slip
Thin material
To
One side
Revealing beauty
Swollen
Wet
Clitoris
Labia
Ripe for taking
One finger
Gentle
Stroke
Caress
Shudder for me
Then
Tip
Dips
Into you
Fit to burst
“Do
It”
You
Beg
Not yet
I am
In control
I
Decide
When.
Legs
Restrained
Perfect X
Heavy breathing
Eyes
Covered
Blindfolded
Darkness
Suspense building
My hand
Resting
On lacy
Knickers
Rising heat
I rub
Grip
You moan
I smile
Mounting pleasure
Slip
Thin material
To
One side
Revealing beauty
Swollen
Wet
Clitoris
Labia
Ripe for taking
One finger
Gentle
Stroke
Caress
Shudder for me
Then
Tip
Dips
Into you
Fit to burst
“Do
It”
You
Beg
Not yet
I am
In control
I
Decide
When.
Published 2nd Dec 2018
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Anonymous
2nd Dec 2018 12:07pm
Wow! Incredible! Breathless ...I am.
2nd Dec 2018 1:00pm
2nd Dec 2018 2:32pm
wow..... I love how in control you are in this piece... makes me wanna play the dominating role with my wife which I know she will enjoy... let her know im in control now and I say when she can climax.... love it.... I almost miss my own erotica...
2nd Dec 2018 3:30pm
In my experience most women seem to enjoy the loss of control and the dominance of their lover, but of course every woman is different so always talk it over first.
2nd Dec 2018 5:22pm
Very well done Rjm. The edges of domination are smooth in this piece, not at all harsh. Nice pen.
2nd Dec 2018 5:24pm
Ha I'm afraid I'm a soft BDSMer. I couldn't bare to hurt a lady too much, even if they wanted it.
2nd Dec 2018 5:27pm
That’s very sweet. I enjoyed the soft feel of this with a stern undertone. A stern reminder of who is in control is often times all one needs. You have a knack for writing “soft bdsm” ☺️
