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Your Ring of Fire
You don't mess around
No teasing
When I tell you what I want
Your bring it
Mark of communication
Between lover's
In your raw
Rebirth through fire
No teasing
When I tell you what I want
Your bring it
Mark of communication
Between lover's
In your raw
Rebirth through fire
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Raw and satisfied
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Re. Your Ring of Fire
1st Dec 2018 1:26am
I was reborn some where in the annals of my crushed spiral notebooks, picture made me think of that..
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I've got a bunch of those notebooks too. Mostly all my sales over the last 15 years. I like to flip through them every so often. When I retire I might have a one man show entitled
"Road Salesman"
Feature all my notebooks and my worn out shoes ....
"Road Salesman"
Feature all my notebooks and my worn out shoes ....
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1st Dec 2018 7:41am
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Re. Your Ring of Fire
Anonymous
1st Dec 2018 9:40am
Nice!
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