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Nocturnal
Sharp light splintered throughout the day
Shards shattering the unstained glass
Delivered to these tired eyes
And striking at a fevered soul
She understands, and shares the night
And soon my fear begins to fade
Shadows that tremble at the door
Allow us to begin our dance
She leads me slowly to the floor
With her soft, cold hand holding mine
The darkness lowers, and prevails
But we can waltz then pour the wine.
Shards shattering the unstained glass
Delivered to these tired eyes
And striking at a fevered soul
She understands, and shares the night
And soon my fear begins to fade
Shadows that tremble at the door
Allow us to begin our dance
She leads me slowly to the floor
With her soft, cold hand holding mine
The darkness lowers, and prevails
But we can waltz then pour the wine.
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Re. Nocturnal
30th Nov 2018 10:08pm
dearest Sir Crow I am twenty over my RL limit under Crim
but I can feel your soul in this write and thought i'd save it here...
beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
but I can feel your soul in this write and thought i'd save it here...
beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
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1st Dec 2018 00:12am
I keep running out of room in my own RL list. Thank you for adding it to your own, dear Brenda.
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30th Nov 2018 10:09pm
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1st Dec 2018 8:48am
I am back with my life and my poems. My treatment of cancer went well and I am recovering. More power to you my friend ☺️
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30th Nov 2018 10:36pm
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2018 00:06am
Beautiful my dear friend. I echo Brenda. I too am well over, but I only have this page. I love this beautiful write. J
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1st Dec 2018 00:19am
Thank you so much J. My RL is continually stuffed, and I sometimes go back years to make some sacrifices. A daunting prospect.
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2018 1:10am
Infact that's what I did. I had to have this beauty for future reads. Hugs my friend. J
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1st Dec 2018 10:06pm
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Anonymous
2nd Dec 2018 4:41am
Hey Crow.......this is a brilliant ink.......beautiful when two souls dance in the night sharing more than wine.......luv it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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4th Dec 2018 11:58pm
The wine is not a necessity. It's what's in the heart that counts. Thank you Flower!
Re. Nocturnal
4th Dec 2018 11:45am
Simply divine, my crowfly friend. It leaves me wanting more, but don’t indulge me.
Jadey x
Jadey x
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4th Dec 2018 11:55pm