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Turmoil Again (Strange Creature comp..)
please dissect
my hope
noble insect
teething rope
untested
this view
infested
personal glue
strange
creature
back
to zero
don’t belong
outshined
got it wrong
fucking blind
simple posts
outdated
lonely ghosts
overrated
can’t
compete
becoming
obsolete
till poets
and poetesses
brought
me back again
made
insanity
make sense
within
forgotten
yesterday
tucked
abstract
reborn
into
turmoil
again
my hope
noble insect
teething rope
untested
this view
infested
personal glue
strange
creature
back
to zero
don’t belong
outshined
got it wrong
fucking blind
simple posts
outdated
lonely ghosts
overrated
can’t
compete
becoming
obsolete
till poets
and poetesses
brought
me back again
made
insanity
make sense
within
forgotten
yesterday
tucked
abstract
reborn
into
turmoil
again
Published 30th Nov 2018
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30th Nov 2018 8:49pm
dearest Dave you will never be obsolete
you are a great poet...
your art speaks for you in a powerful way...
love you my brother...
love Brenda 💕
you are a great poet...
your art speaks for you in a powerful way...
love you my brother...
love Brenda 💕
30th Nov 2018 10:27pm
Brenda.. thanks beautiful.. you're so kind.. makes me feel better.. love you..
Dave
Dave
2nd Dec 2018 5:51pm
I just love how you killed this piece.... the way you broke it down was just amazing... I love to see different forms of writing and different ways of speech.... I truly do enjoy this
3rd Dec 2018 10:18pm
3rd Dec 2018 6:35pm
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