A Murder in Snow

Wow! A blackbird gatherimg of such magnitude would definitely constitute the death of what we would regard as a Wiinter Wonderland. This is a delicious visual treat, the likes of vanilla ice cream sprinkled with "semi-sweet" chocolate chips, for it carries a slight bitterness. Lovely and well done! ❤📝

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left unsaid is all that red

ah, if hitchcock had only been a poet
and when it came to the birds
just a little more specific ..   :)

That last verse nails it as it breaks the rhyme and gets your attention.
I like crows; they’re a living metaphor
As opposed to say pigeons lol

Woo!   a present-day Dickinsonian classic.

Wicked....  I like how this created a deep curiosity inside,
wanting more



Good job dear!

An enjoyable read!  And I particularly liked that "Murder" in the first line is also the collective noun for a group of crows.

One small novice observation: "thousand of crow" didn't sound right, because my brain wants to say "crows", but this would maybe mar the rhyme.  I suppose that you could also put "Snows" too.  

Thank you for the suggestion.  A thousand crows and thousands of crows would be grammatically correct.  I took liberty with this because thousands denotes plural of a singular collective noun, as in thousands of bison. I'm unsure if crow could properly pass as an irregular plural form of noun in English standards; however, I did like the way it sounded so utilized it as such.  

While it's more than likely incorrect, i.e  one deer two deer, one sheep two sheep - one crow two crow,  it's difficult to determine with so many exceptions. A little liberty never hurt any poetry!  

Thank you for your comment; you have a good eye.

I do like a little poetic liberty.  By such means does language advance.