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Sunlight Rests
Sunlight rest as so does she
and into deeepest night
a peaceful night
streaks cross hidden bridges
bringing a sullen sense
of serenity to her sleep
And when light returns again
her eyes like gold will shine
and her heart so warm will beat
while knownst all my thoughts
alone will bare her name
into endless eternity
and into deeepest night
a peaceful night
streaks cross hidden bridges
bringing a sullen sense
of serenity to her sleep
And when light returns again
her eyes like gold will shine
and her heart so warm will beat
while knownst all my thoughts
alone will bare her name
into endless eternity
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27th Nov 2018 1:22pm
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27th Nov 2018 5:40pm
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Anonymous
27th Nov 2018 3:25pm
You and that romantic pen of yours...another beautiful poem...
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27th Nov 2018 5:41pm
I've been call Mr Romance lol
it's just simple thoughts from a heart that is smiling.
Thanks Willow
it's just simple thoughts from a heart that is smiling.
Thanks Willow
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Anonymous
27th Nov 2018 5:38pm
Very nice, and romantic, my friend.
Great piece.
MZ.
Great piece.
MZ.
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27th Nov 2018 5:42pm
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Anonymous
27th Nov 2018 5:46pm
That's good my friend!
When my poems write themselves, they come out like gurgling noises, and a cat hacking up a fur ball, so I'm glad yours come out better!
MZ.
When my poems write themselves, they come out like gurgling noises, and a cat hacking up a fur ball, so I'm glad yours come out better!
MZ.
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Re. Sunlight Rests
28th Nov 2018 00:02am
This melts my frozen heart and really is inspired. A love poem, and one with rapture. Excellent work, JusTim!
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28th Nov 2018 00:17am
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Aaww this so beautifully captured hon...
lovely and refreshing as always...dont ever stop, pls
lovely and refreshing as always...dont ever stop, pls
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Re. Sunlight Rests
1st Dec 2018 7:57am
I just came back from a walk, felt these sentiments exactly, great write!
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