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Waiting On the World to Change
Sitting in my silent room,
Waiting on the world to change.
Always working in my mind,
Yet everything just stays the same.
Brilliant thoughts accomplish nothing, without the will to set them free
From the abstraction of the mind into something that the world can see.
Waiting on the world to change.
Always working in my mind,
Yet everything just stays the same.
Brilliant thoughts accomplish nothing, without the will to set them free
From the abstraction of the mind into something that the world can see.
Published 25th Nov 2018
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25th Nov 2018 10:35am
27th Nov 2018 6:21am
Thanks, Sweet! I've never really taken the time to figure out what kind of poem it is, but I'll take your word for it. I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
changing apartments
the same building
one corner swallowing the sun
the other stabbing the moon
both were the same
the same building
one corner swallowing the sun
the other stabbing the moon
both were the same
30th Dec 2018 9:34am
30th Dec 2018 7:46pm
For me this could be the beginnings of writer's block.
I enjoy Your style of spilling ink
I enjoy Your style of spilling ink
31st Dec 2018 4:32am
31st Dec 2018 5:21am
For each thing life takes from you it gives something back in exchange.
Cant say im sure but I can see life took something important from you but gave you the thinking of a king.
Keep it up fam I really enjoy your work!
Cant say im sure but I can see life took something important from you but gave you the thinking of a king.
Keep it up fam I really enjoy your work!
14th Jan 2019 9:03pm
Thinking of a king? What a wonderful compliment you've given me. I sincerely appreciate your feedback and flattery!
2nd Jan 2019 2:26am
I can relate to this - as a person with millions of big ideas and desires to make the world a better place, but..... how to execute the plans?? I hear your frustration. Well put.
2nd Jan 2019 2:59am
5th Jan 2019 2:16pm
10th Jan 2019 4:44am
14th Jan 2019 9:58am
I can relate to this feeling-- I love how precisely you put it into words. Excellent work :)
~rosegold
~rosegold
14th Jan 2019 10:06am
Aww, thanks so much, rose! I am happy that you found the poem to be relatable, although the feeling can be very frustrating at times. Thanks for the wonderful compliment!
13th Nov 2020 2:07am
"Brilliant thoughts accomplish nothing, without the will to set them free"
I need to remember this.
I need to remember this.
