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Freedom
No quarter given when she asks
Safe word not uttered when she's bound
Silent about the ties that bind
Not one sweet murmur, not a sound
She favors the kiss of a whip
A preference for a deal of pain
No mercy, just a bit of hell
It seems that she can take the strain
I order her to use her mouth
And suck until the fall of night
The wet sounds give me quite a thrill
But I instruct her not to bite
I then forgive her many sins
Release her when she's turning numb
Now untied she goes freaking wild
Her freedom is what makes me come.
Safe word not uttered when she's bound
Silent about the ties that bind
Not one sweet murmur, not a sound
She favors the kiss of a whip
A preference for a deal of pain
No mercy, just a bit of hell
It seems that she can take the strain
I order her to use her mouth
And suck until the fall of night
The wet sounds give me quite a thrill
But I instruct her not to bite
I then forgive her many sins
Release her when she's turning numb
Now untied she goes freaking wild
Her freedom is what makes me come.
Published 24th Nov 2018
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Anonymous
24th Nov 2018 8:25pm
Wow dear Crowfly, this is some heavy stuff. I love the passion expressed in regards to freedom. Yes, freedom goes wild when allowed. There is no doubt. This is something I truly feel. Great ink. J
26th Nov 2018 00:52am
The freedom may entail a willingness to be a submissive. But there are limits, Thank you J!
25th Nov 2018 2:41am
Hey Crow......luv this intense feeling this gave me......very passionate and visual.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
26th Nov 2018 00:53am
Anonymous
25th Nov 2018 5:33am
Oh, lordy! "The kiss of the whip" exquisite write.
26th Nov 2018 00:55am
25th Nov 2018 12:51pm
"She favors the kiss of a whip
A preference for a deal of pain
No mercy, just a bit of hell"
mmm delicious write dearest Sir Crow...
love Brenda 💋
A preference for a deal of pain
No mercy, just a bit of hell"
mmm delicious write dearest Sir Crow...
love Brenda 💋
26th Nov 2018 00:56am
