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Sun haiku

Lost sun in the sky
shining down its ancient rays
Guiding the creatures

Written by Hunterapsych

(Shaman among machines)

Published 24th Nov 2018

#earth #haiku #nature #sun #WritingPoetry

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Re. Sun haiku

24th Nov 2018 6:49pm

what a nice little piece of Haiku...
delighted to see you dabble
in brevity... so effectively Ely

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24th Nov 2018 9:48pm

Thanks for your kind comment🙏✌

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Re. Sun haiku

26th Nov 2018 7:35pm

Beautifully utilized brevity. I love haiku.

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Re. Sun haiku

7th Apr 2019 5:16pm

Beautifuly done

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Re. Sun haiku

17th Apr 2019 7:03am

Great thoughts here!!

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