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True Dominance
you can be dominant
in the bedroom
she can easily slip into
her reptilian mind
without much effort
like putting on a silk dress
she'll slip into that role
and let you have her in
whichever hole you choose
her goddess will
moan for you
cum in loads for you
stain the sheets
and inflate your ego
she will call you her King
but don't be fooled
that could be an
incomplete sentence
are you her King in all things
beyond the sexual arena?
yeah..you fucked the
shit out of her Aphrodite
but have you met her Athena?
the wizened woman
the warrior spirit
the hard core pragmatist
the expert survivalist?
are you still as dominant
do you even know
what dominance means
outside of the bedroom?
it's not about dominating her
but dominating yourself
disciplining your self
are you a man of means
of goals..aspirations
are you a provider of nuts
and nuthin else?
she loves fuckin you
and she may even love you
but does she want to live with you
build a life with you?
be a real wife to you?
a homemaker
and a love maker?
yeah..
she desires good dick
but she admires and requires
a good decision maker
now do you understand
the nature of
true dominance?
are you on your grind
out there bustin your ass
doin that overtime
are you on her mind
dominating her compassionate self
does she care if you're well fed
and well rested
you ain't gotta be perfect
but she gotta see
the work ethic in you
now tell me
do you know what
she sees
when she's on her knees
sucking your dick?
is she looking at you or
looking past you?
in the bedroom
she can easily slip into
her reptilian mind
without much effort
like putting on a silk dress
she'll slip into that role
and let you have her in
whichever hole you choose
her goddess will
moan for you
cum in loads for you
stain the sheets
and inflate your ego
she will call you her King
but don't be fooled
that could be an
incomplete sentence
are you her King in all things
beyond the sexual arena?
yeah..you fucked the
shit out of her Aphrodite
but have you met her Athena?
the wizened woman
the warrior spirit
the hard core pragmatist
the expert survivalist?
are you still as dominant
do you even know
what dominance means
outside of the bedroom?
it's not about dominating her
but dominating yourself
disciplining your self
are you a man of means
of goals..aspirations
are you a provider of nuts
and nuthin else?
she loves fuckin you
and she may even love you
but does she want to live with you
build a life with you?
be a real wife to you?
a homemaker
and a love maker?
yeah..
she desires good dick
but she admires and requires
a good decision maker
now do you understand
the nature of
true dominance?
are you on your grind
out there bustin your ass
doin that overtime
are you on her mind
dominating her compassionate self
does she care if you're well fed
and well rested
you ain't gotta be perfect
but she gotta see
the work ethic in you
now tell me
do you know what
she sees
when she's on her knees
sucking your dick?
is she looking at you or
looking past you?
Published 23rd Nov 2018
| Edited 24th Nov 2018
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Anonymous
24th Nov 2018 3:14am
Insightful man you are, like it very much
Anonymous
24th Nov 2018 10:57am
“Is she looking at you or looking past you”
Bruh ! What !?!? This is stupid ridiculous respect in the level of its depth!
RL add, Nuff said ! Boom ! 💥
Bruh ! What !?!? This is stupid ridiculous respect in the level of its depth!
RL add, Nuff said ! Boom ! 💥
24th Nov 2018 3:39pm
yeahhh man..always check for the intent in her stare..
very desirous and potentially dangerous language
very desirous and potentially dangerous language
24th Nov 2018 2:13pm
Thanks for the reference to my my work Naajir!
Like you, I was also right into the American alt rock girl-band Hole. Some of Courtney’s lines just blow you away. Take these for example:
“I could really suck you in
And you'll never see the light again” (Phone Bill Song, 1997)
Like you, I was also right into the American alt rock girl-band Hole. Some of Courtney’s lines just blow you away. Take these for example:
“I could really suck you in
And you'll never see the light again” (Phone Bill Song, 1997)
24th Nov 2018 3:25pm
cum in loads for you
stain the sheets
and inflate your ego
she will call you her King
but don't be fooled
This piece is really interesting! As a woman I had to think of how many times I have been in this position and what actually crossed my mind. Sometimes it was for him. But most times... *smiles* it was all about me! I needed to see him submit to desire my lips my lust. That was the only reason to look up. To confirm I had him in the place to give me the Optimal Orgasm!
It is really uncanny how you write from such a feminine perspective sometimes. I said all that to say EXCELLENT PIECE!!!
stain the sheets
and inflate your ego
she will call you her King
but don't be fooled
This piece is really interesting! As a woman I had to think of how many times I have been in this position and what actually crossed my mind. Sometimes it was for him. But most times... *smiles* it was all about me! I needed to see him submit to desire my lips my lust. That was the only reason to look up. To confirm I had him in the place to give me the Optimal Orgasm!
It is really uncanny how you write from such a feminine perspective sometimes. I said all that to say EXCELLENT PIECE!!!
i paid attention over the years...closely..it was poetesses such as yourself that served as great teachers of the nuanced esoteric nature of womanhood..
i thank you..for your comment and sharing your own experiences
i hope dudes are listening...beyond their egos...
i thank you..for your comment and sharing your own experiences
i hope dudes are listening...beyond their egos...
24th Nov 2018 6:43pm
The Second of Law of Matter.. .
such harsh important facts,
it's about time someone lectured it
such harsh important facts,
it's about time someone lectured it
24th Nov 2018 8:52pm
Anonymous
26th Nov 2018 2:39pm
There are observations and expressions in this piece that have long been on my mind. It takes an honest soul to go where you go. Much respect
