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Image for the poem Gorgeously so

Gorgeously so

.
"Beautiful" he'd say,
Following it up with,
"Gorgeously so"
Giving a whistle of approval
& appraisal

Dressed to impress,
Ready to hit the town,
Excited happy

But it was the way pointed
to the table first;

My raising of the dress &
graceful lean

The wait..

Cool air,

The wait..

Panties in his grip,
roughly pulled down

The wait..

"Beautiful"
"Gorgeously so" he'd say.

The wait..
& wait..


Hard was the strength of
his randomness in not holding
back,
reverberations felt throughout,
From buds hardening to
that one down there weeping

Quiescent stayed my pose,
In being happy for his
happy excited display,
from his hand, the provider of
such beautiful worship.

Till satisfied his moment
was completed

Standing up
Pulling up
My dress, pulled down
Straightened out

A last look in the mirror,
Flushed
A deep breath
My hand in his, a kiss, a smile,
A thankyou given to show my
appreciation that I'd be most
appreciative of later on,
Before the town; We did
take our adventures to.
Written by Lookawaynow (Rose)
Published
Author's Note
Lovely happy excited be the moments of my silent surrender to the admiration of his touch
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