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Longer Looks
.
Not sure if I was to
kneel down;
If my obvious arousal be
too revealing,
Though it would be right
to think he'd take many
long looks & longer appraisals,
till enjoyment levels peaked
& worshiping carress to begin
And later on he'd not
forget my kneeling or
my too revealing,
As I accept quietly his ways
Not sure if I was to
kneel down;
If my obvious arousal be
too revealing,
Though it would be right
to think he'd take many
long looks & longer appraisals,
till enjoyment levels peaked
& worshiping carress to begin
And later on he'd not
forget my kneeling or
my too revealing,
As I accept quietly his ways
Published 19th Nov 2018
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 9:56pm
At it's best!!!
So sensual dear Rose, bravo!!
So sensual dear Rose, bravo!!
19th Nov 2018 11:20pm
19th Nov 2018 10:32pm
There is no way he could forget...the images will be with him till he savored more...very well written...🐺🌹
19th Nov 2018 11:21pm
20th Nov 2018 7:14am
One of your lines led me this rhyming pair:
If my obvious arousal be too revealing,
His excitement for much long he won't be concealing....
If my obvious arousal be too revealing,
His excitement for much long he won't be concealing....
20th Nov 2018 7:20am
