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...and i thought i was some good
helping out
whenever
whoever
i could
holding not
much grudge
'cept for the enemy
like i am
to him
as he is
to me
and i thought
this is it
i am
happy
the only way
to be
till i came
across
the floral plain
where life is forever
sustained
by the non-discriminating
r a i n
rock, sand or clay
fire, water or snow
cares not the rain
enmity's invain
her care
all the same
no matter what
ya name
love is
all that she is
love is
all that she knows
love is
all that she shows
love is
all that she glows
and
love is
all that she flows
amongst
the living
and i thought
i was some good...
whenever
whoever
i could
holding not
much grudge
'cept for the enemy
like i am
to him
as he is
to me
and i thought
this is it
i am
happy
the only way
to be
till i came
across
the floral plain
where life is forever
sustained
by the non-discriminating
r a i n
rock, sand or clay
fire, water or snow
cares not the rain
enmity's invain
her care
all the same
no matter what
ya name
love is
all that she is
love is
all that she knows
love is
all that she shows
love is
all that she glows
and
love is
all that she flows
amongst
the living
and i thought
i was some good...
Published 19th Nov 2018
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
19th Nov 2018 5:05pm
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19th Nov 2018 5:08pm
welcome
dear Poetess
also welcome
is your kind, keen and insghtful as well as generous review
yes indeed we have a lot
to learn from nature
and fortunately there are some special humans they possess the same nature
this just an attempt at expressing what's witnessed
appreciation
beyond words
of the visit
the review
dear Poetess
also welcome
is your kind, keen and insghtful as well as generous review
yes indeed we have a lot
to learn from nature
and fortunately there are some special humans they possess the same nature
this just an attempt at expressing what's witnessed
appreciation
beyond words
of the visit
the review
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
19th Nov 2018 5:12pm
<< post removed >>
19th Nov 2018 5:17pm
:-)
well you nailed it! exactly dear friend! and fortunate is what i am or in other words blessed... to have found souch soul(S)...
well you nailed it! exactly dear friend! and fortunate is what i am or in other words blessed... to have found souch soul(S)...
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
19th Nov 2018 5:20pm
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19th Nov 2018 5:22pm
:-) indeed
what else would you call someone who not return hate for hate even for those whom hold grudge against them...
what else would you call someone who not return hate for hate even for those whom hold grudge against them...
19th Nov 2018 5:21pm
Hello fuze... do not forget... you are doing a very fine job of appreciating those delightful features ... and somebody's got to do it...
So how do you fare this very fine morning, sir? You are doing a swell job with the elements of nature, so far. Batting 1000 as they say... thanks for the
delightfully
attenuated piece
of
poetry. Ely
So how do you fare this very fine morning, sir? You are doing a swell job with the elements of nature, so far. Batting 1000 as they say... thanks for the
delightfully
attenuated piece
of
poetry. Ely
19th Nov 2018 5:26pm
Hey Ely!
well Sis you made me grin wide and long.... thank you dearly for that!! :-)
you on the money there Sis...somebody's gotta do this... some credit overdue
though not sure about the quality of poetry...but sure i am
of the qualities of the reflected subject :-)
OMG..batting 1000..ha ha ha! well you on fire there Ely...tonight! thank you for the warmth!
regards
deep and beyond words
c_f
well Sis you made me grin wide and long.... thank you dearly for that!! :-)
you on the money there Sis...somebody's gotta do this... some credit overdue
though not sure about the quality of poetry...but sure i am
of the qualities of the reflected subject :-)
OMG..batting 1000..ha ha ha! well you on fire there Ely...tonight! thank you for the warmth!
regards
deep and beyond words
c_f
19th Nov 2018 5:42pm
Hello, my dear friend, welcome back.
But I’m a little confused by something. Why do you doubt if you’ve been of some good or not?
But I’m a little confused by something. Why do you doubt if you’ve been of some good or not?
19th Nov 2018 5:45pm
Welcome dear Friend Jadey!
and thank You...for your welcome... glad to be home! :-)
well...i wasn't doubting i was any good...in fact the opposite...thought nothing can beat this,,, the best way to live... till i saw the light and truth in nature in Rain as well as in someone's nature... :-)
Glad beyond words
to see you here dear Friend!!
and thank You...for your welcome... glad to be home! :-)
well...i wasn't doubting i was any good...in fact the opposite...thought nothing can beat this,,, the best way to live... till i saw the light and truth in nature in Rain as well as in someone's nature... :-)
Glad beyond words
to see you here dear Friend!!
19th Nov 2018 5:50pm
“Someone’s nature”? Oh I see... I’m glad for you, my friend.
(you’ve been missed)
(you’ve been missed)
19th Nov 2018 5:51pm
awwe! well Missed you too Friend!
and yes...and Thank You...see You my friend glad for a friend's finding blessings.
thank Yiou Jadey!
and yes...and Thank You...see You my friend glad for a friend's finding blessings.
thank Yiou Jadey!
Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 5:56pm
This is such a positive little gem. That old saying is that actions speak louder than words. If people are getting poems written about the good of their actions, I’d say they’re doing life right.
Very much enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.
-M
Very much enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.
-M
20th Nov 2018 8:15am
welcome Missy!
honored and blessed this cold one.
blessed for the reason of this poem
honored with your generosity and kindness here.
well Missy, positive is all i have got from that source
and benefited so had to mention that somewhere and somehow
glad is but an understatement Friend to express my joy you liked the scribble.
c
honored and blessed this cold one.
blessed for the reason of this poem
honored with your generosity and kindness here.
well Missy, positive is all i have got from that source
and benefited so had to mention that somewhere and somehow
glad is but an understatement Friend to express my joy you liked the scribble.
c
19th Nov 2018 6:21pm
Great write, appreciate the reading of this. I'm new to the art and learning all of the time. Thank you
Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 6:53pm
Cold One!!
You rule, my man!!
Seems it's been a long time since you've written, but well worth the wait!
You're writing is fantastically enjoyable always.
Really liked that! Good to see you, some people just bring great joy to things, and you're one.
MZ.
You rule, my man!!
Seems it's been a long time since you've written, but well worth the wait!
You're writing is fantastically enjoyable always.
Really liked that! Good to see you, some people just bring great joy to things, and you're one.
MZ.
19th Nov 2018 8:11pm
I have said it more than once, and I shall repeat it again here, for all the world to see,
You, my brother, are a BEAUTIFUL PERSON, and a joy for all who can appreciate such a friend.
This poem is but one example of the beauty that lies within you.
Blessed?, absolutely!, you for knowing this Lady, and us for knowing you and being a part of our community.
You, my brother, are a BEAUTIFUL PERSON, and a joy for all who can appreciate such a friend.
This poem is but one example of the beauty that lies within you.
Blessed?, absolutely!, you for knowing this Lady, and us for knowing you and being a part of our community.
