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stardust
the stardust of me lingers
in the power of you
a divinity inspiring awe
breaking me down to nothing
I await a renewal of being
my catastrophe was monumental
the demonic shook all prowess
left me on my knees broken
I was skyscraping in my intentions
you saw me fall from the celestial
but it wasn't for naught
in your eyes found beautiful
in your skies shining like a diamond
clear-cut with perfect clarity
you wanted more from me than any human
I wouldn't give you all of me
I was stingy in my affections
you have all authority to crush me
instead, you dust me off
and place me back in the heavens
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19th Nov 2018 2:55pm
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19th Nov 2018 3:02pm
thank you graciously dearest Tallen for the love on this write...
love Brenda ✨
love Brenda ✨
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19th Nov 2018 3:07pm
thank you dearest I IS Me for reading and sharing your thoughts... you are deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 3:17pm
Beautiful read my dear. Very sweet and full of tenderness. J
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19th Nov 2018 3:21pm
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis beautiful soul...
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
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19th Nov 2018 5:57pm
thank you graciously dearest Tim you're right this is real love...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. stardust
19th Nov 2018 5:52pm
I was skyscraping in my intentions
you saw me fall from the celestial
but it wasn't for naught
in your eyes found beautiful
you have all authority to crush me
instead, you dust me off
and place me back in the heavens
Get out of town, girllllllll
you saw me fall from the celestial
but it wasn't for naught
in your eyes found beautiful
you have all authority to crush me
instead, you dust me off
and place me back in the heavens
Get out of town, girllllllll
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19th Nov 2018 5:58pm
Re. stardust
19th Nov 2018 6:16pm
"the stardust of me lingers
in the power of you
a divinity inspiring awe
breaking me down to nothing
I await a renewal of being" a truly divine piece👏 your writing always possesses an exquisite ethereal flow, wonderful penning Brenda✌👏
in the power of you
a divinity inspiring awe
breaking me down to nothing
I await a renewal of being" a truly divine piece👏 your writing always possesses an exquisite ethereal flow, wonderful penning Brenda✌👏
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 6:28pm
Crimmy,
That's just beautiful writing, my friend!
From the gorgeous wording in that 4th stanza, to the wonderful subject matter.
You're awesome, my friend!
Love,
Matthew.
That's just beautiful writing, my friend!
From the gorgeous wording in that 4th stanza, to the wonderful subject matter.
You're awesome, my friend!
Love,
Matthew.
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Re. stardust
19th Nov 2018 7:04pm
"you have all authority to crush me
instead, you dust me off
and place me back in the heavens "
... sounds like you encountered a gracious god ... no doubt well deserved :))
instead, you dust me off
and place me back in the heavens "
... sounds like you encountered a gracious god ... no doubt well deserved :))
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19th Nov 2018 10:10pm
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23rd Nov 2018 1:33pm