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Omitted Love
I thought I had forgotten
each memory erased
forever
I never thought I
would feel my heart
quicken as he passed
close to me
walking alone down
confining streets,
I said I did not care
No thoughts of him would
traverse my mind,
All I feel is my heart,
making me lonely.
each memory erased
forever
I never thought I
would feel my heart
quicken as he passed
close to me
walking alone down
confining streets,
I said I did not care
No thoughts of him would
traverse my mind,
All I feel is my heart,
making me lonely.
Published 19th Nov 2018
Author's Note
Love is hard to find, harder to forget.
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 8:37am
Succinct description of a broken/wandering heart. Enjoyed & can relate.
19th Nov 2018 12:04pm
a complicated truth in this ink!
" I never thought I
would feel my heart
quicken as he passed
close to me " <<---- this is what is super relatable for me -- in a heartbeat my adrenaline would spike if i walked by my most recent ex --
" I never thought I
would feel my heart
quicken as he passed
close to me " <<---- this is what is super relatable for me -- in a heartbeat my adrenaline would spike if i walked by my most recent ex --
Anonymous
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6th Nov 2019 5:17am
