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Motionless
Time.
It carries on
and always will;
But deep inside,
deep in our love,
time stands still.
Some time
& sometimes
It may be time, this
Time.
In Your heart, time to smile
Time and Time again.
Linked in Time
(and) From Your heart,
love stays in time
with me all the while.
Time is still
still motionless,
& still.
It carries on
and always will;
But deep inside,
deep in our love,
time stands still.
Some time
& sometimes
It may be time, this
Time.
In Your heart, time to smile
Time and Time again.
Linked in Time
(and) From Your heart,
love stays in time
with me all the while.
Time is still
still motionless,
& still.
Published 18th Nov 2018
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18th Nov 2018 3:21pm
Love the feel of time being motionless, when in love, time indeed feels motionless
18th Nov 2018 5:49pm
18th Nov 2018 3:30pm
18th Nov 2018 5:49pm
Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 4:59pm
Damn! You're good, my man!
That IS beautiful, resonating wording.
Love that 'But deep inside, deep in our love, time stands still'.
Awesome. You're a fine writer, my friend!
Matthew.
That IS beautiful, resonating wording.
Love that 'But deep inside, deep in our love, time stands still'.
Awesome. You're a fine writer, my friend!
Matthew.
19th Nov 2018 5:01pm
You honor me with this praise.
Thank You for this and the RL add
You and me must Feel in similar
fashions?
Thank You for this and the RL add
You and me must Feel in similar
fashions?
Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 5:06pm
Absolutely, my man!
And you write really intelligently. I like that!
MZ.
And you write really intelligently. I like that!
MZ.
