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Distance
Laying in bed
With my music
Singing along
To the beat
Wishing you were here
With me
So I could
Feel complete
Hoping for
Some sleep
So I can
Get through
All these
Busy days
While waiting
For you
I long to
Hear your voice
And see your
Sweet smile
Hearing those
3 simple words
I haven't heard
In a while
With my music
Singing along
To the beat
Wishing you were here
With me
So I could
Feel complete
Hoping for
Some sleep
So I can
Get through
All these
Busy days
While waiting
For you
I long to
Hear your voice
And see your
Sweet smile
Hearing those
3 simple words
I haven't heard
In a while
Published 17th Nov 2018
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17th Nov 2018 6:13am
Beautiful poem and I love the visual it brings to mind. Hope you do not mind but
And see you
Sweet smile
should it not read
And see 'your'
Sweet smile'
And see you
Sweet smile
should it not read
And see 'your'
Sweet smile'
17th Nov 2018 6:35pm
Thank you so much! Sometimes I read it over so many times that I cant see spelling mistakes. 😁
I'm so glad you like it! :)
I'm so glad you like it! :)
17th Nov 2018 7:36pm
I read and reread and reread before I post lol although I find as I am Canadian that some words show up as mistakes because of spelling ie color is spelled colour where I am from lol. Look forward to reading more of your ink : )
17th Nov 2018 7:56pm
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