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6 OUT OF 10
Our conversations
Had me thinking
I am ready
This is real—
Poetry lover
Obsessed with words
And their ability
To cast long shadows—
Then you layered yourself
In bubble wrap
And rolled away
Triggered by a protest poem
That was 6 out of 10
On the intensity scale
If that
Had me thinking
I am ready
This is real—
Poetry lover
Obsessed with words
And their ability
To cast long shadows—
Then you layered yourself
In bubble wrap
And rolled away
Triggered by a protest poem
That was 6 out of 10
On the intensity scale
If that
Published 15th Nov 2018
Author's Note
She had her valid reasons to respond to "11/11/18" the way she did. These are just words of confusion and emotion. I would be a fool to question the power of one's life experiences. Goddamn disrespectful poem that needed to spill out.
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16th Nov 2018 12:37pm
Bubble wrap; what fun is that? What are we without scars?
The long shadows line is great.
The long shadows line is great.
16th Nov 2018 3:11pm
