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Reveal

.
He didn't ask
I didn't say

Random act
green light
Loving sight

The sudden raising up
of material,
cool air on hardening buds

I'd know his surprised response,
And mine of;
"Sweet dreams sweet one"
😆😆😆😚
"Catcha tomorrow"
Before logging out

Leaving him still typing,
Though,
Imprinted on his mind,
I'd know the kinda dreams
he'd be having
Written by Lookawaynow (Rose)
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