pain's vulnerability

It's a hard pill to swallow

Honest Critique: You're a wonderful writer.
Your words are just beautiful, and the flow from you, to your relationship, to the conflict, to the end result of your pain, is fantastic!
I analyzed, and now I see why you're such a beautiful writer!
Thank you for being here, and sharing with us!
Love,
Matthew.

Take into consideration this person might not be as mobile as you would like them to be

You may be fragile in some ways, but you remain a powerful poet.  Favorite lines:

you cut me deeper than I care to admit
so here I am with tears in my eyes
for the poet with the slick tongue

Heartbreaking but beautiful, Brenda.  I always admire your eloquence, and how you catch romance (possibly unrequited} in your own unique style.  

Brenda.. truthful as always.. great ink my sister.. you always make me think.. love you..







Dave

Life is unfair. I know for my own personal experience. Love is devotion. No matter how weak we are. But if the other doesn't feel the same, we are freed from any tie and commitment. That's why I've now changed my standards. I will drink from the cup of life until I am drunk. I will love, but I will build a wall around my heart. It took my years to realise this and I still tremble when I shouldn't. Don't let anyone get you down sweet one. You are much better than this. You are first of all a beautiful soul, an outstanding poetess and, I feel, an exceptional woman and human being. You have given me strength more than once. I am here for you if you need to talk. I've said it before and I repeat it. For what it's worth. Truly yours devoted follower, Juvenalis.

you lied when you said you loved me

*sighs*

they tend to do that...nice ink