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Passion
The waves start to roll
hitting the shore
the tempo of their crests breaks
rising and falling
Crashing against the rocks,
violently,
tenderly,
The sky darkens,
the sea builds
a roaring crescendo
a sudden calm
The waves gently caress the shore
their gentle crests break softly
...as the tide rolls out
hitting the shore
the tempo of their crests breaks
rising and falling
Crashing against the rocks,
violently,
tenderly,
The sky darkens,
the sea builds
a roaring crescendo
a sudden calm
The waves gently caress the shore
their gentle crests break softly
...as the tide rolls out
Published 13th Nov 2018
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Anonymous
13th Nov 2018 7:56pm
Oh, lordy this is just beautiful!
19th Nov 2018 2:46am
Waves making love to the shore wink ; ) you girls inspire so much. Thanks for the comment SG69
Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 3:41am
🤗
13th Nov 2018 9:15pm
19th Nov 2018 2:51am
Love on the beach under the moonlight waves crashing your shore, the words and feelings girls inspire in us boys : ) thanks for the comment SweetO
13th Nov 2018 9:48pm
dearest Stan so soothingly lovely
I really felt peace reading this...
love Brenda 💕
I really felt peace reading this...
love Brenda 💕
19th Nov 2018 3:08am
Passion is everything and glad I could make you feel something as we all hope that what we write will make our readers feel something. Thanks for the lovely comment Brenda : )
19th Nov 2018 1:09am
It seems to me that all of the poems that I've read so far can relate to music in one way or another. I'm liking your style.
Nicely done!
Nicely done!
19th Nov 2018 2:53am
