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'til Death Do We Meet
You're felt
in every warming ray of sun
I hear you
in each gentle whispering breeze
your presence resides
within the fragrance of every flower's scent
apart of each drop of falling rain, and
among the winking stars that fill my nights
my eyes search those of passing strangers
as I long
for just a spark of recognition
I know you are there
though the sun hides your face
the breeze keeps your name
and the rain, Oh.... your rain
washes the salt from my cheeks
yet, if we are never to be in this life
I fear not death, for
in my heart
I know it shall put to rest
This Unacquainted Love
Author's Note
For those still searching. Keep the faith
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Re. 'til Death Do We Meet
12th Nov 2018 2:09pm
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Re. 'til Death Do We Meet
12th Nov 2018 2:35pm
Such an exquisite poem beautiful imagery.
"yet, if we are never be in this life
I fear not death, for
in my heart
I know it shall put to rest" great line loved this👏✌
"yet, if we are never be in this life
I fear not death, for
in my heart
I know it shall put to rest" great line loved this👏✌
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17th Nov 2018 3:19am
Thank you for your kind words, Hunter. Truly appreciate your visit and comment.
Teri
Teri
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12th Nov 2018 3:01pm
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Re. 'til Death Do We Meet
12th Nov 2018 3:46pm
Oh the ache, your pen peels the layers back vulnerably. May faith steady you poetess <3
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17th Nov 2018 3:22am
I'll never lose faith in the power of love.
Thanks for stopping by Audrey.
Thanks for stopping by Audrey.
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12th Nov 2018 4:15pm
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Re. 'til Death Do We Meet
12th Nov 2018 8:40pm
Very moving.... I am not searching but that's how it would be if he was gone.
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17th Nov 2018 3:25am
I have no doubt you'd feel this way, Ange.
Thank you for parking a comment on this.
Thank you for parking a comment on this.
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12th Nov 2018 11:08pm
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17th Nov 2018 2:41am
That's good to hear, never! give up your faith, dear poet. It's worth every minute, believe me.
Teri
Teri
Re. 'til Death Do We Meet
18th Nov 2018 1:42am
Wonderfully evocative. This has a spirit much like the work I am thinking about, which I intend to be distilled qualia.
Daniel
Daniel
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18th Nov 2018 6:00pm
One would be hard pressed to find a poet who could better explore let alone express the intangible properties of human emotion than you, my friend. I shall look forward to reading your work.
Thank you, Daniel
Thank you, Daniel
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Anonymous
3rd Dec 2018 8:28pm
Touched me deeply, very relatable of late.
Beautiful Teri.
Beautiful Teri.
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3rd Dec 2018 9:15pm
I am so sorry to learn this relates, Sophie. I truly hope that ends many, many years before the last stanza I've written here.
I'll keep you in my wishes, dear lady
I'll keep you in my wishes, dear lady
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Thank you, WW.
Nice to see you tumble by, must be an easterly wind blowing, hope it's a gentle breeze, my friend.
Nice to see you tumble by, must be an easterly wind blowing, hope it's a gentle breeze, my friend.