God's gift

A marvellously sinister and elegant poem. Fear, voyeurism, religious derangement, all encapsulated by this short, concise piece. The dark irony of the title is scarily bitter, and the priest you let us glimpse is repellant. Immediate reading list add.  
A couple of grammatical nits. "It's" doesn't need an apostrophe, and "eyeing" should be spelt like so.
Thanks for the read, Eamonn

Cheers, Jack
Sinister is really what i was trying for with this.
Glad all the different aspects of what i was thinking came across so well for you.

thanks much for the listing, honored i am.

fixed 'its', eyeing showed up as a misspell when i first wrote it so when i spell checked it eying was the option that was presented.Must be a yank thing like gray.

I love the contempt of the priest and the imagery is brilliant..dark and sinister indeed..bravo peace Crim :)

Crimson,
Thanks much for dropping by and leaving your thoughts.

shine on!  :)

It is brilliant Eamon. I think thats all I can say, that has not been said.

Blue Skies dude.

ahh, Alip man!
how the hell are ya!.
 
thanks for the visit and kind comment.

you honor me with the listing.

I loved this, Eamon! Jack pretty much said it all, but I really do like the length and bluntness of the ending. :]

well, thanks much Aglitch.
 
good of you to drop in and  honor me with a listing.
:)

So short. So dominating and intricate in my very mien!
Kudos to you Eamon!

Thanks much Adele.

good on ya for read and comment, and indeed the listing.

much honored.   :)

for all that we seek
there is not a more pleasureable treat
than the aroma of panties that leak
when temptation slowly begins to creep
even with great Faith desire makes us weak
hungering for that taste of something sweet
between thighs we bow in a manner so discreet
& say grace....its time to eat....lol

Eh,

Good of you to drop by my humble pages, Preacherman.
personal i like to draw a line between the weak and the predators.
interesting though to get your perspective and insight.

thanks again Goodest.  

eamon you know your words are always riviting....& i almost was going to go with the predator theme because of the mention of the young girl but when you said "the whore he spat" then that gave me the impression that she was either willing or of legal age....leading to weakness....lol

hey no worries man.
figured you were just seeing the good in a person.
always good to have a different look at a thing.
no harm no foul.

This captures not only the reader but makes you worry for the girl, I'm impressed. I love the domination in every word and the conviction before irony. Bravo

LA,

thanks for your kind words of praise, very encouraging to read them it is.

btw  the bastard murdered the girl about an hour later, the things he done to her were unspeakable then he went home...and prayed. :)


thanks again.

i can never be tired of reading this little piece of wonder.
stunning job!

ophelic.

Thanks much for dropping by and leaving your thoughts.
always a pleasure.

shine on!

This is a suprising and elegant piece of work in the completeness of the images without excessive flora. Professionally and beautifully structured in my opinion. Well done.

 jolais,

thanks so much for dropping by and your kind comment.

for the record, in my opinion your opinion is damn straight.  :)

thanks again.

what can say that already hasn't been said! I'll just add a bit more praise and say well done!

 chameleon, thanks for dropping by reading and leaving your thoughts.

shine on!

I loved the ironic imagery...well written!!

well, thanks Rakhi Rudra.

DarkDreams,

Thanks for your visit and vote of confidence.

interesting is good.

such an ironic yet fitting title, i love it

ahh, well Thank you, Grapes

I guess i had one of them rare 'moments  while writing this little number.

welcome to DU aand thanks for stopping by.

Very intriguing, you have a multifaceted muse going for you, most definitely.

Miss T,

its always a good thing I think to keep moving the  eyes about the place see what one can come up with .

appreciate the stop in and words.