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The Outline Of You
Gentle the rains awash this tepid soul
drenching me, cleansing me
of the dirt and grime of yesterday's pain
leaving me with a clearer vision
I look out to the night time sky
a brilliant sky, full of hopes
fulfilled runaway wishes,
and blown into the breeze kisses
and see
for the first time I see
a silhouette of dreams
outlined in a caring blue
starshine tingles of tenderness
staring amongst the stars
light streaks, feelings are piqued
thrums echo every beating chamber
inside an ever growing heart
I raise my eyes
gaze off into your dazzling sky
and i know, I just know
drenching me, cleansing me
of the dirt and grime of yesterday's pain
leaving me with a clearer vision
I look out to the night time sky
a brilliant sky, full of hopes
fulfilled runaway wishes,
and blown into the breeze kisses
and see
for the first time I see
a silhouette of dreams
outlined in a caring blue
starshine tingles of tenderness
staring amongst the stars
light streaks, feelings are piqued
thrums echo every beating chamber
inside an ever growing heart
I raise my eyes
gaze off into your dazzling sky
and i know, I just know
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Re. The Outline Of You
Anonymous
11th Nov 2018 3:23pm
Seriously good stuff my friend
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11th Nov 2018 3:28pm
Re. The Outline Of You
11th Nov 2018 3:23pm
dearest Tim you are a man of great passions
this is so rich with beautiful feeling
I got swept away...
beautiful ink...
love Brenda 💕
this is so rich with beautiful feeling
I got swept away...
beautiful ink...
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
11th Nov 2018 6:19pm
So much hope in your words. Beautiful, Tim
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11th Nov 2018 10:27pm
Re. The Outline Of You
11th Nov 2018 10:54pm
Love the optimism and certainty of this one, JusTim. This is one of my favorites of yours. Beautifully written and inspirational.
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Re. The Outline Of You
14th Nov 2018 1:45pm
This has such hope ... fills me with such peace ... excellent write JT ... one of your very best ...
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14th Nov 2018 2:57pm