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Suzy’s Secret Smile
Suzy’s Secret Smile
Her waggish tongue tickles his ears
with the British charm of a peasant girl
raised on tongue in cheek earthiness.
Déjà vu takes him by surprise
as she gives him a sidelong glance
with the fiery eyes of a Lass
ready to greet the sailors in Blackburn.
Her waggish tongue tickles his ears
with the British charm of a peasant girl
raised on tongue in cheek earthiness.
Déjà vu takes him by surprise
as she gives him a sidelong glance
with the fiery eyes of a Lass
ready to greet the sailors in Blackburn.
Published 10th Nov 2018
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10th Nov 2018 5:50pm
dearest John sounds like you shared a beautiful moment...
I enjoyed this very much...
playful with rich undertones of seduction...
love Brenda ❤
I enjoyed this very much...
playful with rich undertones of seduction...
love Brenda ❤
10th Nov 2018 6:31pm
Mucho gracias mi amiga. Love that you picked up on the undertones of seduction here. Though this was a fictional word painting writing it was indeed a beautiful moment.
Much love,
John 💕
Much love,
John 💕
