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Devotional She
she lurks
a tigress on the prowl
she howls unnoticed as a nicety
scowls at betrayal of her
sacred vows
as she bestows love
against her best interest
a hard core lover
blessed with many treasures
yet to be discovered
ready and willing to be a devoted wife
to share all of her life
endure all the strife
if..and only if she believes that
what she feels
is worth the deal offered
to her
Published 7th Nov 2018
Author's Note
When a woman devotes...much is expected
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7th Nov 2018 5:51pm
7th Nov 2018 6:38pm
if..and only if she believes that
what she feels
is worth the deal offered
to her
my kinda woman. This lady has a inner strength. You have to deserve her and she has to feel you do. I like it. I think she's my new Hero. another nice poem Naajir.
what she feels
is worth the deal offered
to her
my kinda woman. This lady has a inner strength. You have to deserve her and she has to feel you do. I like it. I think she's my new Hero. another nice poem Naajir.
7th Nov 2018 7:08pm
7th Nov 2018 9:19pm
8th Feb 2019 1:34am
Great way to look at marriage and very true I love that it's not traditional and I love the battle that she's going through with the commitment
