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Pleasing
The thought of you drips me wet
Hungry to have you inside
I’ll swallow, if you want to bet
Your dick I want to ride
Throbbing veins inside my mouth
Your cock just loves my warmth
Slip and slide you down my south
Rocking hips, back and forth
My pussy always weeps for you
You feel me up with joy
“Go deeper” and you always do
My moans you dare employ
Bite my neck, you spread my cheeks
You’re thrusting harder and deeper
You make me leak, we'd fuck for weeks
You’re definitely a keeper
Hungry to have you inside
I’ll swallow, if you want to bet
Your dick I want to ride
Throbbing veins inside my mouth
Your cock just loves my warmth
Slip and slide you down my south
Rocking hips, back and forth
My pussy always weeps for you
You feel me up with joy
“Go deeper” and you always do
My moans you dare employ
Bite my neck, you spread my cheeks
You’re thrusting harder and deeper
You make me leak, we'd fuck for weeks
You’re definitely a keeper
Published 6th Nov 2018
| Edited 5th Dec 2018
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5th Dec 2018 11:19am
Salacious ink Alice! A couple of typos but good cadence and intensity. Really enjoyed this one.
2nd verse 'vanes' and 'fourth' I think they should be veins and forth.
3rd verse 'My moans you help convoy' I don't get unless you mean convey?
I hope you don't mind the critique, hope it helps.
2nd verse 'vanes' and 'fourth' I think they should be veins and forth.
3rd verse 'My moans you help convoy' I don't get unless you mean convey?
I hope you don't mind the critique, hope it helps.
5th Dec 2018 11:36am
Thank you so much !!
I've made the edits and redone a line as 'convey' didn't rhyme the way I wanted it to haha
Really appreciate the constructive criticism !
I've made the edits and redone a line as 'convey' didn't rhyme the way I wanted it to haha
Really appreciate the constructive criticism !
Anonymous
8th Jan 2019 4:57pm
This is delicious !!
