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Gradation
Years pass
Finding myself
Hard journey
Bits of gray
Some pink for color
Drinking in your sensual
Coffee dark
No sugar
Finding myself
Hard journey
Bits of gray
Some pink for color
Drinking in your sensual
Coffee dark
No sugar
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Re. Gradation
5th Nov 2018 1:29pm
Re. Gradation
5th Nov 2018 1:34pm
Re. Gradation
5th Nov 2018 4:32pm
Change is always inevitable. It’s the bit of color that keeps us constant and grounded.
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Re: Re. Gradation
5th Nov 2018 7:16pm
Re. Gradation
5th Nov 2018 7:54pm
I remember when I was eighteen very clearly, now I'm approaching 42.
Where did my youth go?
Dark Sun...Elvis died at 42.
Where did my youth go?
Dark Sun...Elvis died at 42.
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Re. Gradation
5th Nov 2018 8:06pm
I'm a lot older, and I mean a lot
your youth passed fast, it's what you do now to go forward.
your 40s I believe are the toughest decade. You're hard on yourself.
You're a good guy and a good writer. Go easier and have fun man
your youth passed fast, it's what you do now to go forward.
your 40s I believe are the toughest decade. You're hard on yourself.
You're a good guy and a good writer. Go easier and have fun man
Re. Gradation
Anonymous
5th Nov 2018 8:11pm
Subtle patterns and sneaky pinks.
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Re. Gradation
5th Nov 2018 11:38pm
Re: Re. Gradation
6th Nov 2018 1:11am
Snuck in a little pink to give it a diversion. I have a thing about gray and black ....
Thx b
Thx b
Re: Re. Gradation
6th Nov 2018 1:52am
The pink gives it a comfortable feel. Like a warm spring rainy day, instead of a cold November one.
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Re. Gradation
6th Nov 2018 11:34pm
Re. Gradation
17th Apr 2019 3:51pm
Would probably appreciate it more if i wasnt color blind...interesting words other wise...good write
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Re: Re. Gradation
18th Apr 2019 1:13am
I don't know why I even put the Pink in, all I wanted was black and gray anyway
Thanks !
Thanks !