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IT IS TIME
IT IS TIME
Above, the view soon severed free
scetched into you and me
with cussing praying sighs now hurled
into a rhyme of iconic scorn
My love for you will forever be
etched into you and me
Now I must say goodbye to this world
For it is time to be born
Above, the view soon severed free
scetched into you and me
with cussing praying sighs now hurled
into a rhyme of iconic scorn
My love for you will forever be
etched into you and me
Now I must say goodbye to this world
For it is time to be born
Published 5th Nov 2018
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5th Nov 2018 11:50am
Really like the structure of this ... wonderful rhyming ... last two lines bring the poem home ...
5th Nov 2018 9:25pm
"Now I must say goodbye to this world
For it is time to be born"
... great lines , a keen unexpected twist; really nice - and true.
For it is time to be born"
... great lines , a keen unexpected twist; really nice - and true.
10th Nov 2018 8:42am
13th Nov 2018 1:30pm
