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Forbidden Love
OH TO BE TRAPPED BY THE GIRL IN THE BOAT
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OH TO BE TRAPPED BY THE GIRL IN THE BOAT
Written by
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
Published
2nd Nov 2018
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For the #FeelingTrapped visual poem comp
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#FeelingTrapped
#fish
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#ForbiddenLove
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Re. OH TO BE TRAPPED BY THE GIRL IN THE BOAT
_Ani_
2nd Nov 2018 3:54am
love this, so great
romantic with a touch of mystique
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Re: Re. OH TO BE TRAPPED BY THE GIRL IN THE BOAT
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
2nd Nov 2018 6:21am
Thanks Ani
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Re. OH TO BE TRAPPED BY THE GIRL IN THE BOAT
Angelast1
2nd Nov 2018 3:47pm
Very well written...Good metaphor
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Re: Re. OH TO BE TRAPPED BY THE GIRL IN THE BOAT
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
2nd Nov 2018 3:54pm
Thank you Angela. I had fun with the "wanting to be trapped" trap inversion. Trapped is a rich concept, because we all are in any number of ways, and it's not necessarily a big negative.
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Re: Re. OH TO BE TRAPPED BY THE GIRL IN THE BOAT
Angelast1
2nd Nov 2018 4:06pm
Your's sounds like a pleasure trap.
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