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the islands of us
scroched ..! ".. ! ' surface
burnt -""----^^______^^--""bridges
permanent ~~~~~~~~~~~ tide
all connections<----->
.....................................
underwater
this
is isolation
not
independence
burnt -""----^^______^^--""bridges
permanent ~~~~~~~~~~~ tide
all connections<----->
.....................................
underwater
this
is isolation
not
independence
Published 31st Oct 2018
Author's Note
make not the mistake
of presumption
world revolves around you
narc.
of presumption
world revolves around you
narc.
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The author encourages honest critique.
31st Oct 2018 5:09pm
That were the auld way o' thinkin'...
now if we follow the trend...
we'll find technology blinking
like its timer is fixin' to...
send us all back to our maker... tech is not always our friend. Ely
now if we follow the trend...
we'll find technology blinking
like its timer is fixin' to...
send us all back to our maker... tech is not always our friend. Ely
31st Oct 2018 5:21pm
clap clap clap!
true Ely! absolutely!
no...just a tool...the tech. we "thinkin" it is
a friend.
and in the macro picture...
some fool says... we get our independence back... isolating ourselves from everyone else, burning bonds, bridges and more...
making the isolation great again... ;-)
true Ely! absolutely!
no...just a tool...the tech. we "thinkin" it is
a friend.
and in the macro picture...
some fool says... we get our independence back... isolating ourselves from everyone else, burning bonds, bridges and more...
making the isolation great again... ;-)
31st Oct 2018 11:43pm
31st Oct 2018 5:38pm
31st Oct 2018 6:05pm
welcome
Dear poetess!
also welcome
are your insight and kindnesss
beyond words
is the apreciation dear Friend!
Dear poetess!
also welcome
are your insight and kindnesss
beyond words
is the apreciation dear Friend!
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
31st Oct 2018 6:14pm
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31st Oct 2018 10:00pm
this is soooo darkly-humorously deep and real
love, it's always a pleasure to read of you, wish
this to be mandatory literature
love, it's always a pleasure to read of you, wish
this to be mandatory literature
3rd Nov 2018 6:56pm
I find this a sage message,
astutely composed, and artistically presented
befitting the depth of the poet's talents.
Well done, brother.
astutely composed, and artistically presented
befitting the depth of the poet's talents.
Well done, brother.
