I Write...

Your trochaic trimeter was interesting ... I wonder what it would've sounded like if you done more of it?

Well I’m not sure, but as it turns out this was a result of what I recalled from a dream I had of me writing lol... thank you, truly appreciate your thoughts n time :)

I write, I write, I write
felt every word, i think most of us here can completely relate
very passionate piece about a passion

Honored bro. N truly thank you for all the support, always! :)

Glad to read your poem again....this is awesome...hope you could write more...

love
Jasmine

Stranger! lol hi sweetie, thanks a bunch :)

I applaud I applaud I applaud this.  

And I think with a little revision, you could greatly capitalize on the end rhyme of "ees".

Thank you bro. Not exactly sure what you mean but hey if you have a suggestion for replacing it or something I’m open to it :)

These are Just suggestions to insert more rhyme scheme, because you already have awesome momentum going in this poem. Feel free to use what you like. ☺    
 
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I write I write I write    
uncoverin’ what belies thy soul    
‘neath the dark of night    
   
I wrote to cleanse these pains    
marrin’ the ‘stain breached white’    
convoluted with all the ill trodden gains    
I saw  
   
I write to wipe away realities    
so real, the appeal ain’t deceivin’ me    
desiring to nest in momentary fantasies    
so raw  
   
Written along mind's empty halls    
my words from the soul in scrolling scrawls    
   
I write ...  
to escape ...  
for poetry truly frees  
I write from my heart    
‘pon now inked art  
decrees ...  
   
I write

Oh I see, u just wanted more? Okie not a prob. I will add a lil more to it in a few then lol

Revised! lol

The new ending is a brilliant addition that rhymes great with decrees, and "pen" and "again" worked in is great!  

Well thanks again bro! Truly...

This is so beautifully written, Poe. As I reread each line within the stanzas it was as a flower unfurling it's pedals, revealing each delicate hue.
Such a feast for the eyes and mind, you have served us this morning.

Truly loved this, my friend.

Aaawww gosh n holly gee you’re so good to me! lol
Thank you sweetness :)

beautifully done and written dearest Poe
I love this...

love Brenda 💕

Thanks sweetest lady :)

Good to see you back,  PoeticOne.  

I would suggest you dream more. 💭📝
This is lovely, and carries a old classic feel; but, I would love to hear what Johnny suggests.

Aaawwww... yea sadly I’m being diverted quite a bit these days but hey you know I gotta spill soooooo... lol. Thanks bunches my dear friend :)

Bravo PD ... so glad to see you poeting again ...

Honest truth is I never stop. I’m a lot less likely to post as much though because of the annoyance
of using them damn # tags lol... anyhow, truly grateful as always for your support my dear :)

No more room on the RL list..this is a must for the archives!!

My dear bro. Just knowing you wanted it in ur RL is good enough for me. Big thanks kid! :)