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Quietude Of Night
There's a serene quietude to the dark
where no dens of iniquity need apply
as peasants push their wears
there's a softness holding on
in the way your curl yourself
every little nuisance captured
like a hedgehog of happiness
all rolled up and full of warm
wrapping all of you around
the stiffness of my soul
caressing as you go
goodness head to toe
there's no chill upon my air
as I battle through the night
sun will rise real soon
and my songs will be in tune
where no dens of iniquity need apply
as peasants push their wears
there's a softness holding on
in the way your curl yourself
every little nuisance captured
like a hedgehog of happiness
all rolled up and full of warm
wrapping all of you around
the stiffness of my soul
caressing as you go
goodness head to toe
there's no chill upon my air
as I battle through the night
sun will rise real soon
and my songs will be in tune
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25th Oct 2018 11:02am
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25th Oct 2018 11:11am
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Anonymous
25th Oct 2018 2:01pm
Gonna ponder this one a bit...it has an eerie calmness to it...I like it
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25th Oct 2018 2:37pm
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Anonymous
25th Oct 2018 4:12pm
Tim,
Very nice writing, my man!
I'm not exactly sure what this 'happiness' thing is, but you seem to have mastered it. Good job, hang on to it.
Matthew.
Very nice writing, my man!
I'm not exactly sure what this 'happiness' thing is, but you seem to have mastered it. Good job, hang on to it.
Matthew.
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25th Oct 2018 5:06pm
Re. Quietude Of Night
26th Oct 2018 00:28am
The battle through the night will end. The night's quiet brings thoughts of both serenity and dismay, depending. There's much to be said for the cathartic effect of dreams. Love this write!
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26th Oct 2018 00:33am
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26th Oct 2018 10:44pm
i dont comment very much anymore from either profile
but to me youll always be that felt beautiful writer
but to me youll always be that felt beautiful writer
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26th Oct 2018 10:47pm