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This Moment
Can I love you
Please for just this moment
One second in time
From a lifetime
Can I hold you
In my arms and my mind
Maybe even in my heart
No, there's nothing left there
But I want to hold you
Tight and close and dear
I want you here, near
Can I please, if you please
I can get on my knees
Bring you to yours
Give you my favors
Taste each others flavors
If you'll allow me
And if I'll allow you
All the things we could do
It really would be nice
I guess that's my vice
To want, to need, to care
No, I don't care
Just want you here
Tonight is alright
But tomorrow is not
Can't stand the thought
Of it lasting that long
Because nothing ever does
Not even love
No it never does
So just let me hold you
Just let me love you
Then go away, never stay
Because I don't know
What that means
It just seems obscene
And I want to be clean
Clean heart and mind
Nothing here for you to find
Except a warm bed
And a woman who is willing
To let go, because it's all I know
Please for just this moment
One second in time
From a lifetime
Can I hold you
In my arms and my mind
Maybe even in my heart
No, there's nothing left there
But I want to hold you
Tight and close and dear
I want you here, near
Can I please, if you please
I can get on my knees
Bring you to yours
Give you my favors
Taste each others flavors
If you'll allow me
And if I'll allow you
All the things we could do
It really would be nice
I guess that's my vice
To want, to need, to care
No, I don't care
Just want you here
Tonight is alright
But tomorrow is not
Can't stand the thought
Of it lasting that long
Because nothing ever does
Not even love
No it never does
So just let me hold you
Just let me love you
Then go away, never stay
Because I don't know
What that means
It just seems obscene
And I want to be clean
Clean heart and mind
Nothing here for you to find
Except a warm bed
And a woman who is willing
To let go, because it's all I know
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Anonymous
25th Oct 2018 3:28pm
Medinda!!
That is brilliant!!! Beautifully sad, and tender, and sexy, and sweet!!
Maybe it's because I know you so well, that I feel it so much, but that is ridiculously great!!
Reading list material for sure.
What a great writer!!(and person). If I could write fantastic poetry, I would have written that!
Love,
Matthew.
That is brilliant!!! Beautifully sad, and tender, and sexy, and sweet!!
Maybe it's because I know you so well, that I feel it so much, but that is ridiculously great!!
Reading list material for sure.
What a great writer!!(and person). If I could write fantastic poetry, I would have written that!
Love,
Matthew.
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26th Oct 2018 4:31am
It felt heartless to me but sometimes that's who we are in our darkness. Thank you for the nice words.
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26th Oct 2018 4:47am
Sadly .. true.. at least here we can communicate and meet others with different ..yet same problems.. sigh
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26th Oct 2018 10:13pm
True, my friend. I'm very grateful to be a part of this community, where for the most part, everyone is supportive and so surprisingly non-judgmental.
This Moment
13th Nov 2018 4:53pm
This is simply beautiful, Medinda! It's not something to pull apart, to dissect. It's more like a ripe cherry to pop into your mouth whole, without thinking stem, skin, pulp, juice, pit. Thank you for sharing.
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13th Nov 2018 5:28pm
You are welcome. I find myself reading more of your poems because this one has drawn me in.
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13th Nov 2018 7:11pm
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