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Winds Have Left Their Mark
Flushed
the winds have left their mark
capillaries killed under
undue constraint
a saint you say, I ain't
I only know what I know,
I only see what I see
I know only what I like
and what I don't, I set free
life so simple
but oh so complex
I flex and I fail
I get up and I fail again
life moves and I can't wait
so I turn my back
on the wind
open wide, I spread
my heart
and let it all in
the winds have left their mark
capillaries killed under
undue constraint
a saint you say, I ain't
I only know what I know,
I only see what I see
I know only what I like
and what I don't, I set free
life so simple
but oh so complex
I flex and I fail
I get up and I fail again
life moves and I can't wait
so I turn my back
on the wind
open wide, I spread
my heart
and let it all in
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Re. Winds Have Left Their Mark
24th Oct 2018 10:03pm
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24th Oct 2018 10:23pm
Re. Winds Have Left Their Mark
Anonymous
24th Oct 2018 10:25pm
Hey Tim,
I like that. Very contemplative, and thought provoking.
Nice writing.
MZ.
I like that. Very contemplative, and thought provoking.
Nice writing.
MZ.
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24th Oct 2018 10:27pm
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2018 10:58pm
If you don't sway with them, they can break you...those winds. But they definitely leave a mark.
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24th Oct 2018 10:59pm
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Anonymous
26th Oct 2018 1:48pm
So complex indeed. And you know what I think of the 'wind' lol :P
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