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Truth of Life
illusory
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illusory
take a breath
feel what's real
cannot see it
do feel it
once expelled
no longer there
I never did own it
Written by
Ralph_Tamez
(Wasere)
Published
22nd Oct 2018
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Re. illusory
Ely
(E.A.Rothwell)
26th Oct 2018 5:53am
A lovely study in brevity... thanks for the breather... ;D
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Re. illusory
Ralph_Tamez
(Wasere)
- Edited 26th Oct 2018 6:45am
26th Oct 2018 6:44am
You are quite welcome Ely lol
That was a longer poem ...
Then I just started taking more and more words out.. till only this was left. ..
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Re: Re. illusory
Ely
(E.A.Rothwell)
1st Nov 2018 5:34am
It's called paring down to the essentials,
all the way down to the gem in the middle... Ely
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