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Beyond the obvious, maybe that's why I identify with you
You tell me things
Then I want to know more about you
We banter and spar
There's more in you
An anger of sorts
Turns me on in an imperfect way
Then I want to know more about you
We banter and spar
There's more in you
An anger of sorts
Turns me on in an imperfect way
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Re. Beyond the obvious, maybe that's why I identify with you
19th Oct 2018 9:40pm
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19th Oct 2018 9:42pm
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19th Oct 2018 9:44pm
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19th Oct 2018 9:46pm
Re. Beyond the obvious, maybe that's why I identify with you
19th Oct 2018 10:02pm
Perfection is overrated.
Sparring is not.
Nice piece. Says much with few words.
Sparring is not.
Nice piece. Says much with few words.
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Re: Re. Beyond the obvious, maybe that's why I identify with you
19th Oct 2018 10:08pm
Re. Beyond the obvious, maybe that's why I identify with you
20th Oct 2018 1:33am
Stunning minimal piece of perfectly packed and successfully delivered emotion ...
Beautiful, thank you!
Beautiful, thank you!
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20th Oct 2018 1:42am
Re. Beyond the obvious, maybe that's why I identify with you
20th Oct 2018 2:31am
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20th Oct 2018 3:00am
Re. Beyond the obvious, maybe that's why I identify with you
22nd Oct 2018 12:38pm
Ooooh, that 'wanting to know more'..... always tantalizing. Nice - short & sweet.
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22nd Oct 2018 12:41pm