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God's Perfect Soul

Tonight I saw a shooting star
It lit the sky from near to far
A gorgeous beam of orangish hue
That paled in brightness next to you

A star that burns and takes to flight
On it's final, lavish path of light
But as it shines across the skies
It dies in envy of your eyes

Oh there's beauty in this world today
From the deep, blue sea to a lost sun ray
But when God said 'what's the best I'll do?'
He waved his hand, and created you.
ElusiveSleepfall
Written by ElusiveSleepfall (MatthewZ)
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Author's Note
True story! I saw a shooting star last night! It was beautiful! I haven't seen one since I was about 10. Following that, I had a conversation(messages, here) with a truly wonderful person I met on...
True story! I saw a shooting star last night! It was beautiful! I haven't seen one since I was about 10. Following that, I had a conversation(messages, here) with a truly wonderful person I met on here, and then I wrote this. It's not very good, but it's from the heart, that's for sure. Meeting beautiful soulz on here has been soooo nice! I wish I could give more, because some people deserve it, but all I can give is my love.
Thank you, you dear person! You're a wonderful dream! Love, Matthew.
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