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Their Music..
Acoustically did her cadence escalate; the sound of their sex on chorus, stanza after stanza. In every note; their every melody of pleasure on key. A beautiful composition; a sweet symphony. The reverberation of his body and hers in harmony; their rhapsody flowed. Song after song; in ecstacy did their concerto continue to play.
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Published 17th Oct 2018
| Edited 27th Jan 2019
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17th Oct 2018 4:20pm
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17th Oct 2018 8:08pm
21st Oct 2018 5:24pm
It was one of those impulse posts that I wasn't happy with it. I'm glad you found it so...thank you!
17th Oct 2018 8:48pm
You've beautifully captured the special intimacy of love making. It's quite unique comparing the sounds to music, hehe.
Well done, Pandora!
Well done, Pandora!
21st Oct 2018 5:25pm
Thank you, I guess I love music as much as words so I've done it often.
17th Oct 2018 9:16pm
21st Oct 2018 5:27pm
Thank you. It was more of an impulse post so I'm glad people liked it more than myself
29th Oct 2018 1:20am
For this musician and songwriter that was so well written with the melody wrapped around every note. Enjooyed reading this.
29th Oct 2018 2:30am
Oh wow..thank you! I posted it impulsively and wasn't too happy with it so it's good to hear!
