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Reading my favorite erotic female
Dragon fly
My favorite peach
Cleaning
my piss stains with chlorine bleach
Feeling tired
Taking a coffee break
Reading erotic poetry
Wow
Lil Dragon fly
Is the
Most popular female
In this wonderful
Beautiful
Poetry site
I love reading
Only You
My favorite color is blue
May I end this poem
With my Latin lips
Kissing your sweet spot
Now I'm in the mood
Feeling very hot
Watching you get ??dr???
Please girl don't stop
My favorite peach
Cleaning
my piss stains with chlorine bleach
Feeling tired
Taking a coffee break
Reading erotic poetry
Wow
Lil Dragon fly
Is the
Most popular female
In this wonderful
Beautiful
Poetry site
I love reading
Only You
My favorite color is blue
May I end this poem
With my Latin lips
Kissing your sweet spot
Now I'm in the mood
Feeling very hot
Watching you get ??dr???
Please girl don't stop
Published 16th Oct 2018
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Anonymous
16th Oct 2018 4:35pm
"Cleaning
my piss stains with chlorine bleach”
Literally thought I might piss myself when I read this.
Not sure I can take it seriously but to try and honour your request for honest critique I felt it could maybe do with drawing on ones senses more to demand certain immediacy…
There’s no denying your reverence of this lady though :)
my piss stains with chlorine bleach”
Literally thought I might piss myself when I read this.
Not sure I can take it seriously but to try and honour your request for honest critique I felt it could maybe do with drawing on ones senses more to demand certain immediacy…
There’s no denying your reverence of this lady though :)
16th Oct 2018 9:16pm
16th Oct 2018 4:45pm
Wow just wow
I had a hard time getting past "Cleaning
my piss stains with chlorine bleach" it left a taste in my mouth that had my jaw dropping. Your admiration has no bounds.
An ode I will not soon forget
I had a hard time getting past "Cleaning
my piss stains with chlorine bleach" it left a taste in my mouth that had my jaw dropping. Your admiration has no bounds.
An ode I will not soon forget
Thanks guys
Well the poetry has to come from the heart
I like to write raw and realness
This poem came about
Me finishing taking a piss
While leaking a couple of piss spots
And cleaning it with bleach
Before my girlfriend finds it filthy
She likes to bitch and complain
About piss stains on the floor
She hates when I leave the toilet seat up
So while through all this cleaning process
I was reading some popular erotic poems
So this poem
came about feelings for a hot girl while cleaning piss at the same time
Real life poetry
Amen
Well the poetry has to come from the heart
I like to write raw and realness
This poem came about
Me finishing taking a piss
While leaking a couple of piss spots
And cleaning it with bleach
Before my girlfriend finds it filthy
She likes to bitch and complain
About piss stains on the floor
She hates when I leave the toilet seat up
So while through all this cleaning process
I was reading some popular erotic poems
So this poem
came about feelings for a hot girl while cleaning piss at the same time
Real life poetry
Amen
27th Oct 2018 11:34am
stay on after her yoga class
let others all pass
then she will show
what u wanna
ask her
she is gentle
yogin omni
let others all pass
then she will show
what u wanna
ask her
she is gentle
yogin omni
28th Oct 2018 1:09am
