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Silence
When I am silent,
I have thunder hidden inside.
~ Rumi
Noise germinates verbiage -
culturing communication
inside petri-dished moments
When distance dissipates
proximity dissolves necessity
of sound beyond breathing
Barrel-chested rhythms
replace words with innate understanding;
blood becomes a messenger
subcutaneously carrying
an antidote of silence
superior to our human language
What is innately known
rises to the surface;
hidden thunder reverberates
~
#Rumi
I have thunder hidden inside.
~ Rumi
Noise germinates verbiage -
culturing communication
inside petri-dished moments
When distance dissipates
proximity dissolves necessity
of sound beyond breathing
Barrel-chested rhythms
replace words with innate understanding;
blood becomes a messenger
subcutaneously carrying
an antidote of silence
superior to our human language
What is innately known
rises to the surface;
hidden thunder reverberates
~
#Rumi
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 16th Oct 2018
Author's Note
For J, with Love 💜
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re: Re. Silence
17th Oct 2018 12:35pm
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Anonymous
16th Oct 2018 1:33am
Hey Ahavati.......I luv this......you’re writing is always amazing......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
16th Oct 2018 1:55am
Uhhmmmmmm ❤💕 This one can only be fully appreciated with a shutting of the eyes, deep inhalations and being with the one you Love in the moment.
I Love This ❤📝 and I love You. 💜💏
I Love This ❤📝 and I love You. 💜💏
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17th Oct 2018 12:36pm
Re. Silence
16th Oct 2018 3:26pm
J is a very lucky person with all that alliterative rhythm, rhyme and consonance.
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16th Oct 2018 3:58pm
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Thank you; I hope you enter the comp! ❤
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10417/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10417/
Re. Silence
17th Oct 2018 1:33pm
"proximity dissolves necessity
of sound beyond breathing"
Beautiful statement of truth. There really is no substitute for presence.
This is lovely; thank you.
of sound beyond breathing"
Beautiful statement of truth. There really is no substitute for presence.
This is lovely; thank you.
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18th Oct 2018 6:11pm
A force of nature to be dealt with, her Love roared with a thousand typhoons curling around a feeling beyond natural elements.
well penned.
well penned.
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