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The Moment I Saw You
I knew
Then when we started to talk
I knew some more
On my side of the world we move fast
Not this time though
Taking my time
Drinking you in
Every nuance
Another layer falls away
I offered to unzip your dress
You made a move and it fell away
Falling into my arms
Exqusite
Then when we started to talk
I knew some more
On my side of the world we move fast
Not this time though
Taking my time
Drinking you in
Every nuance
Another layer falls away
I offered to unzip your dress
You made a move and it fell away
Falling into my arms
Exqusite
Published 14th Oct 2018
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14th Oct 2018 11:07pm
14th Oct 2018 11:09pm
14th Oct 2018 11:14pm
Yeah...maybe I should stop looking. Wise words.
Oh by the way...Talisker, single malt...really good. Try it.
Dark Sun.
Oh by the way...Talisker, single malt...really good. Try it.
Dark Sun.
14th Oct 2018 11:22pm
Talisker is heavy, so much peat
Think I gotta stick to my Wild Turkey 101 for now
Glad you're drinking the expensive stuff
Think I gotta stick to my Wild Turkey 101 for now
Glad you're drinking the expensive stuff
14th Oct 2018 11:25pm
I got a sample bottle...but I'm really into the peaty/smoky flavor.
Dark Sun...expensive tastes.
Dark Sun...expensive tastes.
14th Oct 2018 11:20pm
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15th Oct 2018 12:30pm
15th Oct 2018 12:36pm
Patience has it's moments. I'm not usually wired that way but there are merits ...
15th Oct 2018 12:46pm
Good to soak in every bit of the perfect moment before rushing to the next....
15th Oct 2018 12:48pm
15th Oct 2018 12:53pm
15th Oct 2018 1:03pm
You did tell me. A woman always knows. Men are beasts, trying to un-beast !!
15th Oct 2018 1:24pm
LOL Nah, you don't have to un-anything.... just let the beauty shine too. Which you certainly did with this little bit of romance.
15th Oct 2018 1:26pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Oct 2018 2:52pm
15th Oct 2018 2:51pm
Romantic and beautiful, a nice side of you to read!
15th Oct 2018 3:01pm
I’m told my tender side is my best side. So, I allow it sometimes
Love your comment
Thank you SG
Love your comment
Thank you SG
Anonymous
15th Oct 2018 3:04pm
Happy to know you have that tenderness too, great to know!
15th Oct 2018 4:29pm
The title, followed by the first line....says it all.
Taking the time...
A beautiful piece, Poet.
Taking the time...
A beautiful piece, Poet.
15th Oct 2018 6:51pm
15th Oct 2018 4:56pm
15th Oct 2018 6:51pm
16th Oct 2018 1:36am
Hey PS......how beautiful this is to read......two souls wanting each other yet no words spoke......just jesters loudly heard......just my take on this.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
16th Oct 2018 1:43am
Anonymous
16th Oct 2018 9:17am
Brings a sigh and a smile to my face, this does :-)
16th Oct 2018 1:25pm
