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Captivated
Locks beautiful and flowing,
Like the river Nile.
You got me caught up
In your current.
Ooh your smile,
Your aura,
Overtaking my senses.
So relentless.
I’m powerless
To stop this.
You’ve taken my heart captive,
But I don’t wanna be free.
Loves willful prisoner.
That’s me.
Like the river Nile.
You got me caught up
In your current.
Ooh your smile,
Your aura,
Overtaking my senses.
So relentless.
I’m powerless
To stop this.
You’ve taken my heart captive,
But I don’t wanna be free.
Loves willful prisoner.
That’s me.
Published 14th Oct 2018
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24th Dec 2021 7:59am
Echo LilDragonFly's comment - 'bliss of captivation' could not sum the feeling up better.
The first lines have a ring of Tarzan about them:
Locks beautiful and flowing,
Like the river Nile.
The first lines have a ring of Tarzan about them:
Locks beautiful and flowing,
Like the river Nile.
27th Dec 2021 3:27am
Thank you for your thoughtful comment! The feeling of blissful captivation was what I was going for :)
