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I Look At Myself
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As I look at myself, all that I see,
How I understand the woman I touch.
Divine nakedness laid bare, wide for me,
Between lips & folds revealing as much.
You watch me lover with cock in your hand
As I look at myself, all that I see.
To hold in a breath & stroke as you stand,
You know when I rise, you’ll enter your plea.
Feeling the wet of my clutch by degree,
Hips to ass, slow, while the deeper you go.
As I look at myself, all that I see,
Your fingers, glazed, in the places I flow.
In constant rocking, the height of your moan
Matches the pitch of my sigh in our key.
The mirror will show everything that I’ve known,
As I look at myself, all that I see.
As I look at myself, all that I see,
How I understand the woman I touch.
Divine nakedness laid bare, wide for me,
Between lips & folds revealing as much.
You watch me lover with cock in your hand
As I look at myself, all that I see.
To hold in a breath & stroke as you stand,
You know when I rise, you’ll enter your plea.
Feeling the wet of my clutch by degree,
Hips to ass, slow, while the deeper you go.
As I look at myself, all that I see,
Your fingers, glazed, in the places I flow.
In constant rocking, the height of your moan
Matches the pitch of my sigh in our key.
The mirror will show everything that I’ve known,
As I look at myself, all that I see.
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Re. I Look At Myself
13th Oct 2018 4:27am
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13th Oct 2018 11:33pm
Thank you, Lawrence, for your words of enjoyment & support.
~Jade
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~Jade
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Re. I Look At Myself
13th Oct 2018 5:30am
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13th Oct 2018 11:36pm
My thanks, Leo, for dropping by for a read and your words. Glad you like, and nice to meet you.
~Jade
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~Jade
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14th Oct 2018 3:27am
Re. I Look At Myself
13th Oct 2018 5:42am
Re: Re. I Look At Myself
13th Oct 2018 11:38pm
Thank you very much, your supportive words mean a lot.
~Jade
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~Jade
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Re. I Look At Myself
13th Oct 2018 10:56am
In mirror's sight, where all is revealed, let sustain the deepest wonders.
"In constant rocking, the height of your moan
Matches the pitch of my sigh in our key.
The mirror will show everything that I’ve known,..."
Two together, intertwined, mesmerized.
Tommy
"In constant rocking, the height of your moan
Matches the pitch of my sigh in our key.
The mirror will show everything that I’ve known,..."
Two together, intertwined, mesmerized.
Tommy
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Re: Re. I Look At Myself
14th Oct 2018 00:39am
Thank you, dear tomcat...
very much mesmerized by reflections we’ve been casting.
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very much mesmerized by reflections we’ve been casting.
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Re. I Look At Myself
13th Oct 2018 11:54am
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Thank you so much, my Lil’D, for your wonderful reception of words.
~Jade
~Jade
Re. I Look At Myself
13th Oct 2018 4:40pm
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14th Oct 2018 00:18am
Gracious thanks, SweetO, means much to me. And yes, it is . I love his work.
~Jade
~Jade
Re. I Look At Myself
13th Oct 2018 9:49pm
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14th Oct 2018 00:22am
Thank you, Solomon, and yes. I adore his work. It inspires in ways that need nothing more.
~Jade
~Jade
Re. I Look At Myself
13th Oct 2018 11:43pm
Do you have a mirror on the ceiling? Perhaps I have an overreactive imagination...?
Love your erotica, Jade.
Dark Sun.
Love your erotica, Jade.
Dark Sun.
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Re: Re. I Look At Myself
13th Oct 2018 11:51pm
*smiles*
Thank you for your words of generosity & enjoyment, Sun. And I think your imagination carries you over just fine.
~Jade
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Thank you for your words of generosity & enjoyment, Sun. And I think your imagination carries you over just fine.
~Jade
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Re. I Look At Myself
Anonymous
14th Oct 2018 6:13pm
Your lover is such a fortunate man. xx

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Re: Re. I Look At Myself
14th Oct 2018 6:28pm
Thank you, Rob; that’s so very kind of you. Both he and I agree wholeheartedly.
~Jade
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~Jade
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Re. I Look At Myself
14th Oct 2018 9:27pm
It must be all the more sensual seeing oneself in the mirror as they're being taken from behind in an exquisite dance.
Nicely written, Jade.
Nicely written, Jade.
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Re: Re. I Look At Myself
14th Oct 2018 9:34pm
Oh my dear moon child, how perfectly you embrace every nuance of this piece.
With my gracious thanks.
🌜🐅
With my gracious thanks.
🌜🐅
Re. I Look At Myself
15th Oct 2018 2:19pm
Re: Re. I Look At Myself
15th Oct 2018 2:50pm
Why thank you, John, how lovely your words of enjoyment are as you come to visit & read. I hope you’ve always known over the years how much your visits would & still mean to me. I hope life is being good to you.
~Jade✨
~Jade✨
Re. I Look At Myself
15th Oct 2018 10:03pm
if only you had been standing
in front of a bigger mirror
and facing he
his in hand
shown long in hand in the mirror
would help all others
STAND
that is the whole purpose of DUP
ASK MA'AM
HOLDING IT OR BLOWING IT
for a happier he smooth landing ...
Hope my attitude now is not my folly
NICE FRISKY LOLLY EROTICA IS FUN MANY LOVE TO CUM AND HANDSOME(SOME)
as many cummm to hold aagains lollly
your story is imagery good for thee
Hope many seeing urs are happy
in front of a bigger mirror
and facing he
his in hand
shown long in hand in the mirror
would help all others
STAND
that is the whole purpose of DUP
ASK MA'AM
HOLDING IT OR BLOWING IT
for a happier he smooth landing ...
Hope my attitude now is not my folly
NICE FRISKY LOLLY EROTICA IS FUN MANY LOVE TO CUM AND HANDSOME(SOME)
as many cummm to hold aagains lollly
your story is imagery good for thee
Hope many seeing urs are happy
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29th Oct 2018 11:07pm
Re. I Look At Myself
11th Nov 2018 1:12am
The scene you so masterfully create could be a more explicit Renoir had he painted this. You truly rock the sensual world of this lonely seeker of joy.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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Re: Re. I Look At Myself
11th Nov 2018 7:10am
John, then please let my purple ink keep you from being a little less lonely. And thank you, dear.