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Another rough ride
Flowing through violent waters
fear on my side like an old friend
Not to know where the current will take me
Just a prayer to keep me afloat
A storm in my back
and one in front
All I know is that
I've been here before
and somehow I made it through
So why shouldn't I this time
I think to myself
Meanwhile my little ship
is riding big waves
and the wind
is whipping up froth
fear on my side like an old friend
Not to know where the current will take me
Just a prayer to keep me afloat
A storm in my back
and one in front
All I know is that
I've been here before
and somehow I made it through
So why shouldn't I this time
I think to myself
Meanwhile my little ship
is riding big waves
and the wind
is whipping up froth
Published 11th Oct 2018
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Anonymous
11th Oct 2018 11:57pm
Hi Angel!
Great to have you back.
I thought that was fantastic. Great imagery of the dark seas you're sailing! Love the 'fear on my side like an old friend'(I've got too many of those unwanted friends, too, like loneliness, and sorrow).
Beautiful!
Matthew.
Great to have you back.
I thought that was fantastic. Great imagery of the dark seas you're sailing! Love the 'fear on my side like an old friend'(I've got too many of those unwanted friends, too, like loneliness, and sorrow).
Beautiful!
Matthew.
12th Oct 2018 00:00am
Still ways to go but I will drop in here and there. Thanks for your comment Matthew.
12th Oct 2018 00:10am
Yeah, I have been on a boat on a sea in a storm, and while it was a different boat on a different sea in a different storm, I empathize. Nice (I imagine cathartic) write.
All I know is that
I've been here before
and somehow I made it through
And that's exactly what you have to believe when riding the storm out.
"Can't rain all the time."
~ Eric Draven
I've been here before
and somehow I made it through
And that's exactly what you have to believe when riding the storm out.
"Can't rain all the time."
~ Eric Draven
12th Oct 2018 00:42am
